In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think  that the problem can be solved  by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


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People have differing views about how to aid children in rural areas regarding their access  to education. Although the provision of computers and the Internet can temporarily address the issue, I would argue that the best measure is to establish new schools and employ more teachers.

On the one hand, I understand why some people believe that expanding the Internet network and supplying computers for children in remote areas give them opportunities to approach education. Firstly, it is thought that students can acquire a great deal of knowledge from the online platform, most of which either is free of charge or requires small fees. Educational websites, such as Wikipedia, have been constantly established to promote distance learning for children whose neighborhoods have few schools and teachers. Secondly, online classes and courses are widely available and accessible, which makes geographic adversities become rather irrelevant. It is because students, regardless of their background or location, can enroll in a class or course of their preference. This would  therefore aid them to access education in their remote communities.

On the other hand, I would side with those who think that building more schools and hiring new teachers would permanently solve the problem. Only schools can create an effective  studying environment for students to interact or compete with one another and comprehensively develop their scholastic competence and characteristics. Furthermore,  teachers can discover students’ weaknesses during their teaching process, hence better and more effective educating methodologies, which leads to more fruitful results.

In conclusion, it seems to me that it is best to construct schools and employ teachers in rural areas, instead of depending on technology to bring about education opportunities for children at such places.

Từ vựng chủ lực:

Approach education: Tiếp cận giáo dục
Acquire a great deal of knowledge from the online platform: Có được lượng lón kiến thức từ Internet
An effective studying environment: Môi trường học tập hiệu quả
Their scholastic competence and characteristics: Khả năng học tập và tính cách

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